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A Flame
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A Flame |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Love so sudden, Can it be real. He's always been there, Caused by just a spark. But now a flame, Is growing true. He just doesn't know, He may never will. Unless he finds, My hearts key. < !signature--> If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
great job, emotional and great keep it up |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
good poem...i like the last part...unless he finds the key...keep up the good work...i like your quote or whatever you call it... ~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~ ~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
great post....keep at it! sounds like you've found your flame. salooma |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
thank you all for your comments...as always, there is a story behind this one, I ran into an old friend at "Wally-World" (wal-mart) on saturday, and i dont know, when i saw him, and looked in his eyes, there was a spark, and the flame grew when he kissed me  If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
hey there, loved it. The last part as I noticed is your quote. It is very true. Just keep your head up. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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