»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #3
»
Pointing Fingers
| Teen Poetry #3 |
|
Pointing Fingers |
|
|
TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
People all around pointing at me I just keep asking them "What do you want me to be?" They all know my life is tough But no matter what I do it's never enough I've tried running away from them without making a sound But no matter where I go they're always around All I want is ofr them to go away They never truely want to hear what I have to say When I feel like dieing they just sit there and stare I wonder to myself "how don't they care?" The people I speak of you will never see Because the people I speak of are really me! By, Lauren |
||
| © Copyright 2000 TopGunLauren - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
very good, lots of emotion in this one and as always i loved it great work |
||
|
Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
great poem...truely know how you're feeling. keep up the great writing..hope to reaad more. salooma |
||
|
TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Thankyou for your replies! Lauren |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
