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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
I'm walking through a place unknown to me, just enjoying my peaceful day. the sky blackens. I see lightning strike on the horizon, and then close to me. It falls near me once again, and I know the deal. I can hear the drums of santeria far in the distance. somewhere there's a sanrteria ceremony for some reason Chango is angry. the first small rain drops fall on my head as they part the mango trees. these drops then give way to a solid impenetrable wall of rain. thunder fills the air. lightning falls all around, as if it wanted to hit me somewhere Chango is happy somewhere the blood of many goats and chickens, spills itself in his name. I walk past a church and the drums get louder. "Is saint barbara here?" I asked of the priest. "No she put on a red dress, and left with the witch doctor." then I knew it was true. |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
whoa thats pretty intense, interesting though but still intense, keep it up  |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow Jose, that was really good. You're very good at this, keep it up. Great poem!  Bel |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Very interesting. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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