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Teen Poetry #3

He Said Goodbye

SweetPoet17
Member

since 2000-08-04

Posts 108

0 posted 2000-08-06 03:49 AM

He said Goodbye…
By Jessica DeMaio

Silence swept over the young girls room…
The only sound was the falling of gentle tears…
The closing of her eyes caused the pain to shock her heart…
Her dreams disappeared…
And so did all her hopes…
She opens her eyes…
Her hands close in on her soft skin…
The pain is wiped away yet keeps falling…
Morning a waits with sadness…
Night a waits with sorrowful, hopeless dreams…
She doesn’t understand…
She is beginning to accept the reality of her life…
Her mind drifts to each memory…
She shakes her head in worry…
Where is he?
Why must the silence stay…?
Why must he leave this girl heart broken tucked away…
No answer…
No reason…
No explanation…
He was the one who said their love would never die…
Now she’s just left with one hollow heart…
Because he said Goodbye…

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

1 posted 2000-08-06 04:15 AM

HEY! Oh im feeling the frustration with guys with ya!! It drives me nuts and i can't stand it. But a good one will come around SOMEtime..lets just keep our fingers crossed he comes soon! Keep writing..

~!*DAncinQueen*!~

"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

2 posted 2000-08-06 01:31 PM

Wow! I feel your pain here! Your poem brought tears to my eyes and I can relate so well... Great job

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