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Choose, Your Fear.....
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Choose, Your Fear..... |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
Does the color of my skin scare you? Is there anything they can do for you? Does the sound of my voice tingle your mind? No answers will you find. Choose your fear, Cry your lonely tear. When you hear my name do your eyes wonder? These thoughts and more I ponder. When you look into my eyes do you fear me? Open your eyes fool and you shall see. That it's not me you fear, But to be alone my dear. When I walk behind you do you feel my essance? Can you feel me as your own presence? When I look in your eyes do you see me? I doubt it but you do see a giant tree, I'm the gatekeeper to your life. Can you pass the days and continue to strife? When you follow behind do you think I can't feel? Your presence biting at my heel. Choose your fear not your destiny, And remember to fear one thing and one thing only... FEAR ME |
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Stotty Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 29 |
I really like this poem, especially the end verse -the "Fear me" part. I like the format of the poem, it was nicely thought about. Well done! Wish I could write like that. Michelle. |
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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
I like it, very kinda gothic tones, brilliant |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
nice poem, very strong and wise. -jessica- |
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Euclid the Kid Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 51Eugene,Oregon |
We all sorta have our misgivings and fears, Your message came through Loud and clear. I can identify with this one! Dean |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
great post...i like the way you write these, i like the mystery in em...keep at it and continue writing! salooma |
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