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Don't Break My Heart Again (Confused Thoughts)
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Don't Break My Heart Again (Confused Thoughts) |
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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN Junior Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 20 |
I remember when you held me close, So tightly in your arms, That I thought you’d never let me go We stared into each other’s eyes Saying all that we felt inside our hearts and souls, Without even speaking a word I remember when we kissed, And it all seemed so unreal to me As you slowly ran your fingertips across my back And whispered softly in my ear I love you so much. . . and I’ll never forget you I remember when you held my hand As I laid my head upon your chest And closed my eyes I listened to you breathe as we fell asleep I thought of how I’d never stop loving you And realized I was falling deeper and deeper Into this undying. . . unconditional. . . ??unreasonable?? Love for you But If you truly do love me. . .as you said when you held me Please don’t leave me again If you truly do care. . .as you promised me time and again Please don’t keep walking away If you truly do want me. . .as you told me so often Please don’t tell me goodbye And if you truly do need me. . . I’ll be there anytime, But please be there when I need you. I love you beyond words Beyond the stars Beyond the heavens But I’m also very scared. . . For if my heart keeps breaking, In the way it breaks now . . .I’ll never be able to put it back together again And if I keep crying, The way I cry when you turn away from me . . .I’ll never have tears to cry again I’ll give you my hand I’ll give you my heart I’ll give you my soul I’ll give you my world And the sun, moon, and stars, too, if you want them But if I do, as I already have begun to, Don't break my heart again. |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
thats a pretty heartfelt piece of work, tells how ya feel made me think of my g/f and hope shes sleepin by now anyway good work keep it comin  |
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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
I love this, very moving like your other poems, I've enjoyed reading! Keep writing, please!  [This message has been edited by Lurdburger (edited 08-06-2000).] |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
That was an excellent poem, I truly can relate to those words, I am mending a broken heart as we speak. -jessica- |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
oh my god!! this poem was sooooo beautiful!! while i was reading the words i was feeling these feelings that i've felt before. it seemed as though you've written my thoughts!! i loved this poem!! it's very much like my poem "Can True Love Last Forever" you should read it sometime and see how much alike they are!! wonderful work!! It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked this one because it is so full of emotion that is stated so beautifully. All of it was incredibly enjoyable |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
This is the first I've read of your's and I'm quite impressed. In such a subtle way, this was very powerful. By the way, I'd like to assure you that if he does break your heart again, all of the pieces will fit once more. There will be a wound and when it heals, there might be a scar, but that's what life and experience are all about....good luck. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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