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jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair

0 posted 2000-08-06 01:22 AM


The birds chirp,
It reminds me of your voice,
The bees hum,
It reminds me of your sweet noise,
The ocean roars,
It reminds me of your presence,
The wind blows,
It reminds me of your existence,
The sun shines,
It reminds me of your eyes,
The stars glow,
It reminds me of your cries,
The leaves wave,
It reminds me of your hair,
The silence lurks,
It reminds me of your care

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Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-06 01:25 AM


wowie to another of yours...keep em coming, but don't keep them inside for too long! good luck...

salooma

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