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sweetstuff101
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0 posted 2000-08-06 01:03 AM


Only in my Dreams

I have always dreamed of the day
You would come back to me
Tell me you were wrong,
Try to make me see
That you needed a little space,
And a little time to think,
That you needed to search your life
To find that missing link.
Tell me that you're sorry
And that you want me back,
That you weren't avoiding me
And your feelings aren't in lack
Tell me you were afraid to talk to me
And tell me how you really felt
Every night you prayed
And by your bedside you knelt
Praying for the day that I will understand
These feelings you can't tame
But little did you know
That I have felt the same
I thought you no longer cared for me
As I longed for yesterday
Wondering so much
Why it had to happen this way
Why we had to get so close
And then drift so far
As I sat by my window
Wishing upon a star
Wishing that you
Felt the way I do
Wishing that you
Still loved me too
You tell me you need me in your life
As you wrap me in your arms
I feel so special
Like you can protect me from all harms
I am suddenly yanked back to my harsh reality
As my pulse returns to a gentle tappin'
It is then that I realize
I am waiting for something
that will never happen.


~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~


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Salooma
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1 posted 2000-08-06 01:08 AM


Great poem....wonderful yet sad words. It seems that he's betrayed you and you wish you could change it all, but I guess some guys just deserve what they get and you deserve better than that. Good luck and keep em comin'!

Salooma

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2 posted 2000-08-06 01:13 PM


Oh Hon, my heart goes out to you. You don't know how many times I've wished for things I know can never be. I hope that writing this helped your pain.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
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3 posted 2000-08-06 04:41 PM


Great poem even though it was pretty sad.Keep up the great work!
  Lauren

Kyle Finn
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4 posted 2000-08-06 05:14 PM


very touching, great work keep it up
Erin
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5 posted 2000-08-06 09:07 PM


i am sorry that this happen to you ...but you know what eventually something good will come out of this...maybe you will find someone that you would rather be with...keep up the good work...

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

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6 posted 2000-10-03 09:43 PM


OMG!!! I think my heart just fell on the floor. OMG!!! you almost put me in tears.  This is one of the most sweetest poems I've ever read in passions.  OMG!!! Did you ever give this to him? I hope you did...This poem is just so touching...It's like I lost all my strength and just dropped on the ground. Im very glad i read this

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
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7 posted 2000-10-04 12:07 PM


What a saddening poem. I'm so sorry that you feel this way. If anyone knowsmore about wanting something that could never be it is me. I think I've cried myself to sleep everynight for the last 6 weeks.I know how you feel. i want so much to have a relationshipwith my dad again, but I know that it's never going to happen again. But I think that if you just remember that things will happen the way they were meant to be, (that doesn't brighten your day I'm sure) but it will put the situation into better perspective. Thank you for sharing this with us!!  
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
8 posted 2000-10-04 04:16 PM


thanx for your replies, they were especially appreciated on this poem.

Much Luv,
~*~SweetStuff~*~


~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~


DancinQueen
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9 posted 2000-10-04 05:00 PM


Hey there   This was so sad, but i know what you're feeling. I just wrote a poem called "Only In My Dreams" that im hopefully gonna post when i get the strength to. its kind of like this, hoping that my dreams really will come true, but i know they wont. kinda depressing when you think about it really   but hey keep that chin up and smile because tomorrow's a brand new day and your options are wide open    

love always ~!*DQ*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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