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SweetPoet17
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 108


0 posted 2000-08-05 10:48 PM


Two together as One
I am overwhelmed with the greatest emotion a human being can ever experience,
The emotion of love,
With such tender words,
My mind goes into total utter shock with no complete knowledge that it could hear such things,
My heart beats with such passion and desire I can feel myself ache for the other part of me,
My hands gently glide over my soft tender lips, which yearn for such passionately lips to kiss them,
My whole body goes into such a wonderful state there are no words for my mouth to speak,
I am speechless,
Emotionally and Physically,
My body is overwhelmed,
My ears can not hear words because the feeling is to indescribable to describe,
My eyes are filled with such happiness soft tears gently glide down my cheeks falling silently to the ground,
And my body stays in this state forever,
Love is something that is always felt,
That one moment you feel it for the first time is the most memorable,
Because you have never felt it before,
Love lasts for a lifetime,
A lifetime filled with speechless moments and indescribable feelings,
With that special someone,
Who completes you,
And who you complete,
Two together as one,
One soul,One heart,One person,
Brought together by the most powerful emotion of all,
Love; you know what it is when you feel it,
Dont ask how you'll know it,
Just trust me you'll know it


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Squirter
Junior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 17
Minnesota
1 posted 2000-08-05 10:59 PM


This is great!  I can tell you have truely felt a deep, true love!  Keep up the great work!

Love Always,
Nicole

sweetstuff101
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
2 posted 2000-08-06 12:41 PM


that was good!

Luv,
   ~*~sweetstuff~*~


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