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Broken_Heart
Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57
Netherlands

0 posted 2000-08-05 05:41 AM


My light, my love...

I sit quitely
To watch the evening sky
You are beside me
And we joined hands
Gently we kiss
Sweetly I tell you
You are my light,
You are my love

I caress your lips
With a tender kiss
Just so I know that
I am not living in a dream
You are my angel
Send from above
You are my light
You are my love

I drift away with you
Into a life of bliss
With you I feel happy
I am not alone
You have made me feel
That I had forgotten
How to love
And how to smile
I love you
You are my light
You are my love...

- dedicated to Ellenoor -


Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within...


© Copyright 2000 Jean Phillippe Wijnholds - All Rights Reserved
FoXyGrL009
New Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2

1 posted 2000-08-05 01:07 PM


WOW! I'm speechless...that is SUCH a good poem!!! It tells all about love and the feelings of it!!! I hope Ellenoor...I'm guessing is the person you wrote it for....I hope she feels the same way about you!! Keep writing!!!

*<3*FoXyGrL*<3*

[This message has been edited by FoXyGrL009 (edited 08-05-2000).]

TopGunLauren
Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
2 posted 2000-08-05 02:49 PM


Your poem make a lot of sence to me about love and that's why it's such an awsome poem.Keep up the great work!
  Lauren

Lone Insomniac
Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 45

3 posted 2000-08-05 08:03 PM


Hey uhmm...
kweet niet echt wat jouw naam iz...
maarre ik wou even zeggen dat het een mooi gedicht is...
normaal heb ik het niet zo op liefdesgedichten, maar ik vind deze wel mooi...vooral omdat ie voor een goede vriendin van me is...(elly)
groeten...
Lone Insomniac

SweetPoet17
Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108

4 posted 2000-08-05 11:11 PM


That poem was so beautiful, your so lucky to feel that way, I hope you dont take it for granted because the minute you do.. the minute it ends...
Trust me my friend...
It happened 2 weeks ago to me...
-jessica-

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

5 posted 2000-08-05 11:28 PM


That certainly is beautiful! And very sincere. I don't think I got the chance to welcome you to passions so welcome! And I hope to read more of this great work!

Salooma

sweetstuff101
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
6 posted 2000-08-06 01:00 AM


that was great!

~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~


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