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Deep Within My Heart
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Deep Within My Heart |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
~*~Deep Within My Heart~*~ When I see you, I know that you're the one When I'm around you I always have so much fun I find myself drifting to a place I've never been before Your kisses are so sweet I'm left wanting more I get lost in the sea that your eyes create Within my heart, a constant and grueling debate Do I tell you what my true feelings are If I do, shall I fear I'll push you too far? So many questions,here in my mind And the answers I really need to find If I tell you, will you feel the same? If I keep to myself, I'll be the one to blame I never would have guessed that I would fall so fast I really do hope that this relationship does last So I think I'll tell you how it is I feel Hoping you'll know that my feelings for you are real So tonight, I'll be wishing on a star That your feelings aren't locked within a jar So I'll take my chances and tell you, trying my very best to be stong Hoping that you'll feel the same way and our love will last long ~*~My good friend Janette aka  ChrisLover* and I wrote this together...Hoping we could verbalize the questionable and horrible wraths of deciding whether or not to tell the person you love that you do love them. Let us know how we did!  ~*~~*~Why is it that love always starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear?~*~ |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem is awsome Keep up the good work.I hope to be reading a lot more of your poems! Lauren |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you already know how I feel about this poem. Maybe you should give this poem to him for believe me it will sweep him off his feetAs i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jessica~~~its about time you started posting again!!!this is a good poem that you two came up with...2 thumbs up for you guys...keep up the good work!!! ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Wonderfull team effort I must say. You guys really put this togethor well. You know I luv ya  Later babe.Jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Hey haven't been in in a while and look what I've missed! Great collaboration,girls! Jason and I have written songs together before and this piece makes me nostalgic of those times. Good job. Thomas A. Plemmons "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey! This is awesome. I love all of your poems..keep writing! ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Kyle Finn Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 36Linn, MO USA |
hey you did a great job with your poem and i have more writing look under Kyle aka Huck, i got tired of that name |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
Very very good poem -jessica- |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I'm impressed...as usual. That always is a difficult situation...the best thing to do is just keep it a secret until it either goes away or bursts out of ya...it just makes things simpler. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was excellent!! I know exactly how that feels, b/c I have been going thru the same thing for a while now, it is soooooo tuff! Well great poem , keep up the great work!!Luv, ~*~sweetstuff~*~ ~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there girlie, sorry it took me so long to respond. I have been really busy. I hope that everything goes well with this guy. You two did a terrific job on this piece. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
I love it, very nice |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Great, as always! What else more can I say? Keep it upBel Oh yeah, and e-mail me soon  |
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