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Teen Poetry #3

Life might be tough

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

0 posted 2000-08-05 02:03 AM

Although thing are not perfect
Because of trial and or pain
Continue in thanksgiving
Do not begin to blame
Even though times can get tough
Fierce winds are bound to blow
God is forever able
Hold on to what you know
Imagine life without his love
Joy would cease to be
Keep thanking him for all things
Love imparts thee
Move out of "camp complaining"
No weapons there are known
On earth can yeild the power
Praise can do alone
Until we see him coming
Victorious in the sky
Will win the race with gratitude
eXalting god most high
Yes there will be some good time,and yes there will be some bad
but...
Zion waits in Glory where known are ever sad!

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-08-05 02:23 AM

Lauren~a wonderful poem full of inspiration. I think your points are well expressed here and I think we could all use this optimism in our daily lives. Keep up the good work I look forward to reading more! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Why is it that love always starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear?~*~

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-08-05 01:56 PM

What a positive and uplifting poem Lauren ... very nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2000-08-05 02:05 PM

Thanks for strengthening my faith. Wonderful writing

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

4 posted 2000-08-06 12:58 PM

Beautiful poem! Def something I needed at the time and what a wonderful way it's writen. I loved the camp complaining part...that just put a wide grin on my face cause it reminds me so much of me! A great inspiration thanks for sharing it!

Salooma

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

5 posted 2000-08-06 03:37 PM

Thankyou so much to all of you who have replied to my poem it really means a lot to me!
Lauren

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