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Isabelle
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 176
Indiana

0 posted 2000-08-04 09:56 PM

I dreamt last night,
Of a love--
One greater then all in the world
A love that filled my heart

I dreamt last night,
Of a smile--
One of a contagious state
A smile that made me smile

I dreamt last night,
Of a touch--
One so soft and tender
A touch I'll always remember

I dreamt last night,
Of a person--
One of great importance to me
A person I'll love for eternity

"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-08-04 10:06 PM

Hey there, great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. It kind of relates to some of those dreams I have, but can't think of a way to express them. Keep up the great work.

Chel< !signature-->

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

[This message has been edited by Chel (edited 08-04-2000).]

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2000-08-05 01:46 AM

Your poem was awsome I just wanted to tell you that.i hope to read more of your pems soon.
Lauren

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-08-05 03:34 PM

wow!!! i like this poem...keep up the good work!!!

~No one is worth your tears, and the one who is wont make you cry~

~We all cant be stars but we all can twinkle~

Lone Insomniac
Junior Member

since 2000-08-05

Posts 45

4 posted 2000-08-05 08:06 PM

Hey
I think this poem is great !!!
I always dream about some person who will love me...guess I still have to find one though..
hey but it really looks great...so I hope to read some more !!!
greetzz

SweetPoet17
Member

since 2000-08-04

Posts 108

5 posted 2000-08-05 11:09 PM

I really enojyed that poem...
-jessica-
I dream every night, and remember the next day, it is pretty extrodinary, and I have had that dream, it has yet to come true.

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

6 posted 2000-08-05 11:47 PM

great poem! i like the simple style and use of words! keep on writing and we'll keep reading!

Salooma

Isabelle
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 176
Indiana

7 posted 2000-08-07 09:07 PM

Thanks alot for all your responses i appreciate it. Don't worry i'll keep posting. Thanks again =)

"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~

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