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Misty Blue
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since 2000-05-24
Posts 44


0 posted 2000-08-04 03:41 PM


When Friendships Fail


What else is there to do
When friendships fail
You think about your mistakes
Which you've tried so hard not to prevail

You forget all about the good times
And focus mainly on the bad
Whatever choice you make
You remember what you once had

A helping hand you offered to lend
But inside you know when it's really pretend
You're always thinking about what went wrong
And you hate to see yourself waving so long


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Kittie
Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103

1 posted 2000-08-04 07:22 PM


Very nicely put. Sometimes things fail but we can't pretend they didn't happen and must always remember what will always be in our hearts. Keep your head up.
Kittie



DancinQueen
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
2 posted 2000-08-04 08:01 PM


Great poem! I agree..somethings do fail. But they only make us stronger. Keep you head and keep smiling because theres someone out there for you!!

~!*DancinQueen*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

lupigirl
Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 19
Mequon, Wisconsin
3 posted 2000-08-04 09:18 PM


This says a lot of the thoughts we all feel at one point in time or another... I just lost one of my best friends because he and I had been dating and I decided the relationship wasn't working.... he didn't understand and was VERY VERY hurt by it all..  I understand this poem completely...
Don't forget, however that GOD is in control and you just have to lift your friendship up to Him.  He knows what He's doing... He'll take care of you!  Keep your chin up and keep WRITING!!  


Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
4 posted 2000-08-04 09:40 PM


Hey there, great poem.  I really enjoyed reading it.  I am going through something like this right now, but it wasn't a failed friendship, just a deminished one.  It is slowly fading away.  Keep your head up.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

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