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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN
Junior Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 20


0 posted 2000-08-04 01:44 PM


Someone Will Always Love You
(And That Someone Is Me)


I know that life changes, as things come and go
Time rearranges, and people do grow
But whatever you do, and wherever you'll be
Remember someone will always love you...
(and that someone is me)
Your smile is the sunshine that forever lights my way
And I'll never forget the first words that swept my heart away
So don't ever feel that you and I have lost touch,
That could never happen because I love you so much
We both already know it wasn't meant to be
But remember someone will always love you...
(and that someone is me)
All beautiful things in this world can't compare
To the laughter, the smiles, and the love that we shared
And even though it all has faded into the past,
The commitment to our friendship forever will last
From the first moment that magic had taken its start,
Forever and always, you've been number one in my heart
I'll always be with you, and I hope you can see
That someone will always love you...
(and that someone is me)



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Kittie
Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103

1 posted 2000-08-04 01:53 PM


Again, wonderful poem and great job! The rhyme works really great and you've definitely got real talent.
Kittie



lupigirl
Junior Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 19
Mequon, Wisconsin
2 posted 2000-08-04 10:23 PM


I know exactly what you're feeling here!  Thank you so much for sharing this with us!  You have a real talent.  I can really relate with this poem...  THANK YOU!!  Smile!  


TopGunLauren
Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
3 posted 2000-08-05 02:40 AM


This poem is just as awsome as the rest of the one's I've read of yours.Keep up the great work!
  Lauren

SweetPoet17
Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108

4 posted 2000-08-06 10:46 AM


That poem was great, I wish I was still friends with my past ex, the one I lost my virginity to.  Its awfully hard, but I guess were not meant to be as anything, well anyways that poem was sweet and wonderful.  
-jessica-

Jose Marti
Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
5 posted 2000-08-06 09:46 PM


I like your poetry a lot. You're very good.
This world would be a lot nicer place if everyone had somebody who cared the way you care for this guy.

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

6 posted 2000-08-06 10:42 PM


Very good poem, very sweet.  keep it up
Bel

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

7 posted 2000-08-06 10:45 PM


Beauitful heartfelt poem you've got here. Really sentimental!

Salooma

thebeautybrat
Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida
8 posted 2000-08-14 11:27 PM


i love your work so much!! i will have to read all of them!! all of your poems that i have read so far i can relate to totally...love is the greatest feeling...but heartbreak is the worst feeling you can imagine. (i know that's my signature but i wrote it anyways!! keep up the great work!!
Acies
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since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
9 posted 2000-09-25 03:46 PM


OMG!!! I feel like my poems don't even deserve to be on the same website as yours. All your writings have such strong emotions that jump out to the readers.  Your talent is so extraordinary

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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