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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 20


0 posted 2000-08-04 01:40 PM


Angel in the Darkness


Although you cannot see me,
I'm watching over you just the same
And although you cannot hear me,
I'm there, calling out your name
Although you cannot feel me,
I'm holding your hand ever so tight
And although you just don't know it,
I'm always on time to say goodnight
And when your tears of anguish
Whisper down your golden skin
I'm praying that you feel my love
Comfort you from deep within
And even from a thousand miles,
You're never far from my heart
Because you've reached a place inside my soul
That could never break apart
But even when your time comes,
And you don't make it up here with me
I'd follow you down to the burning fires
Just to be with you eternally.


~I love you D, with all my heart and soul~


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TearsOfPearls
Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa
1 posted 2000-08-04 06:28 PM


This is a lovely poem, gave me goosebumps as I was reading it. Made me realize as well tat even when you feel all alone, you nesver are.

Once again, excellent poem, keep it up  

Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.

DancinQueen
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
2 posted 2000-08-04 06:42 PM


oh WoW! I REALLY liked this...one of my favorites now! It was beautiful. Keep writing!! I love your work

~!*DancinQueen*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Acies
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since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
3 posted 2000-09-25 03:43 PM


I don't know why I never got the chance to read your other poems.  Now, I see that it s defenitely my loss.  Words cannot explain how much I love your poems, they just hit you straight at the heart down to the soul.  Please do share more of your poems...I'll be waiting to read em'

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-09-25 04:10 PM


Wow!!!This was beautiful!!!I am amazed...You have talent...I hope to see more!!!

It TaKeS a MiNuTe To LiKe SoMeOnE, aN hOuR tO hAvE a CrUsH oN sOmEoNe & A dAy To FaLl In LoVe, BuT iT tAkEs A lIfEtImE tO fOrGeT sOmEoNe.

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