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FeMaLe SeNzAsiaN
Junior Member

since 2000-08-04

Posts 20

0 posted 2000-08-04 01:34 PM

There'll Never Be Another Me

Promises broken, chances blown
Bitter tears and feelings thrown
Phony smiles and broken hearts,
Something's tearing us apart
I can't leave, but I can't stay
And I can't believe these games we play
What is it that we did wrong?
Because all the happiness is gone
Before you turn to walk away,
And say those things I know you'll say
Take one good look at what you see
There'll never be another me
Quiet stares and empty words
A cry for love that goes unheard
Painful silence, angry eyes
Emotions that can't be disguised
The laughs and smiles have disappeared
There's no doubt something's missing here
Things are changing, by and by
In ways we can't ask how or why
Confusion's hitting more and more
What exactly are we looking for?
Before you leave and don't come back,
Before you run to where someone else is at
Take one good look at what you see
There'll never be another me

Kittie
Member

since 2000-07-08

Posts 103

1 posted 2000-08-04 01:47 PM

Wonderful poem, and I like the way you use the title throughout the poem. Wonderful job again.
Kittie

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-08-04 01:52 PM

wow!!!this is very impressive...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

3 posted 2000-12-07 03:35 PM

Okay~i dont even know if ure still in passions. but im replying to all your poems ive messed over the last months cause you're BY FAR my favorite poet in all of Passions and i absolutly LOVE your work! Please keep posting!

"A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else"

FlipAngel
Junior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 46
Prior Lake, MN, USA

4 posted 2000-12-07 03:54 PM

Wonderful poem! Great use of rhyming and powerful emotions.

~Rachel~

~*Yesterday is gone, let go of the past; tommorrow will bring new hope to grasp*~

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-12-07 04:11 PM

I think you did an excellent job on this poem, I like it a lot

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2000-12-07 06:44 PM

I thought this poem was really great. Tons of talent within you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2000-12-08 11:45 AM

This was absolutely great!! And your right...there will never be another you!!!! Great poem hun

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

8 posted 2001-03-27 10:09 AM

just bumping one of my favs

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