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A Single Breathe
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A Single Breathe |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
A single breathe... A single word... A single heartbeat... A single feeling... Love... A feeling so silent... But meaning so much... Words so true... So meaningful... Not a night goes by that I dont dream of you.... Tears glistened down my cheeks... As I thought of you... Feelings arose in my heart... As I spoke of you... Smiles....Smilied... As I heard your voice... And then... A single breathe... A single word... A single heartbeat... A single feeling... Love... |
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Squirter Junior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 17Minnesota |
Hey! This is a great poem! It's simple, yet it tells the truth about love...how it feels..what it's like! There's grat times and hard times....you describe them well...keep up the great work! Love Always, Nicole |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Great poem. Very true. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
Hey i really liked this. It was super sweet and sad. I'm guessing it's about the ex? Don't worry things will get better. Believe cuz i know, aight? Keep a smile on that face, k. Tara |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey! This was so simple but meaningful. I liked it. And don't worry about "him" try and forget him because one day you'll meet someone that will make you forget about all the times you've hurt and the people that have hurt you. So until then keep your chin up and dont give up! =) ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem was so awsome but also very simple which was cool.I hope I get to read more of your great poems. Lauren |
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LoveAll Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148B'dale, USA |
WOW! I love it! That was really an amazing poem...I really like~ "Not a night goes by that I dont dream of you...." Great job!  God Bless |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You have this gift of showing a lot of emotions with little words. Bravo!!! Keep it up As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Hey I hope you remember me, I just wanted to say great poem and it was like I told you just smile well i am glad you enjoy this web site so keep up the great work |
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