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Midnight Wish 1
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Midnight Wish 1 |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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As ya'll can tell, I'm not around much anymore...I actually had decided to stop writing, but this I must do...thanx. Midnight Wish 1 Star light, so bright. I'll make this wish again tonight. If I may, and I just might find some peace to stop this fight. Mind still, heart warm. I'll let love guide me to that light. Oh, that light...light so bright can give me peace to sleep tonight. Star light, beautiful light. I've said my peice again tonight. Bestow the warmth I beg of you and you won't read this wish part 2. Jeremy D. Halstead "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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SweetPoet17 Member
since 2000-08-04
Posts 108 |
Ahhhh Priceless is the art of poetry... beauty portrays your words... Thank you for that... Jessica Julia Marie DeMaio AkA Sweetpoet*  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Jeremy ... please don't stop writing. This poem flowed so nicely. You have such talent, and genuine sincerity in your words. I've read many a poem of yours and have been touched by the gift you have for verse. Please do continue ... I hope everything works out for you. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Jeremy, I loved this. I hope to eventually see a part 2. I love all of your work, and I hope that you do keep writing even if you can't post all the time. Well talk to you later. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jeremy~~~this is the best poem by you that i have ever read!!! i dont know why you decided to quit writing and you wont tell me...i just makes me mad that you are letting someone or sonething get it your way...you are very talented... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Jeremy~Since you told me that you were going to stop writing I've lost all of my inspiration. And while I say that it is up to you to continue writing, do as you please. I don't know why you want to put a stop to such a wonderful talent. I hope that you will continue but do as you wish. Either way, I'll still love ya. I hope that you won't become a stranger around here! And I definately hope that you won't be a stranger to me. I would be sad.If you do decide to stop writing, I will surely miss your words of wisdom and your thoughts of intelligence. Hope to see more from you...if not...until we meet again... Love Ya bunches!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ My very good friend Janette has joined the forum you'll know her as *ChrisLover*. Be nice. ~*~Why is it that love always starts with a hug, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear?~*~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey! I LOVED this poem..i printed it out and pit it on my walla of stuff in my room =) If you dont mind...PLEASE don't stop writing. I don't even know you but i always get on and hope you've submitted something. My poetry isn't as deep and passionate as yours, you have a gift! Don't stop! I'll be sad =) ~!*DancinQueen*!~< !signature--> "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 08-04-2000).] |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Alright Jeremy, you have always had something nice or encouraging to say to me, now it's my turn. I sincerely hope that you do not stop writing, I absolutely love your poems, you have way to much talent to let go to waste. And your poem was great! You seem like such a great person- we'll all miss you! I know I will, so please keep writing! Bel |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
I have to agree with everyone else. You write good poetry and it would be sad to see u stop writing. I love your poems I hope to see more. Jeanna "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I loved this poem. I think you should keep writing. I enjoy your poems. I hope you keep writing. Lovely_Kris |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Jeremy~ That is such an awsome poem and I hope to read part 2.Your such a good poet please don't stop writting it would be a shame if you do.People my whole life have wondered why I waist my time writing poems and your a real inspiration. Lauren |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Jeremy, Loved it (as if I wouldn't)! Once again you've impressed me with that talent that you never let show in your day to day. See ya soon. Thomas A. Plemmons "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Jeremy....great work! I gotta agree with everyone here. It'd be a shame to waste such talent. I guess I believe if you have something special in you, as you do, you should share it with the world and it doesn't have to be everyone, but you should share it with whomever you can cause words these days are priceless as are people who master them my friend. I think poetry is the most beautiful thing in the world, and yet others think it's boring so for their sake teach them the magic of poetry and continue writing, it's a shame to waste it all. Good luck and think about it! Salooma |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Just bumping it up before reading part 2... "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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