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Why Does She Do This?
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MeLScHneD Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 11 |
She always complains nothing is ever her fault no matter what it is theres always someone else she blames unless this thing is good then she takes ALL the credit she doesn't know how I feel I wish she understood she says "I'm always right" then, "Guys suck" next, "She's annoying" finally, "My world isn't bright" she talks about how she hates boys next day, she says no one loves her so they're nothing, but everything in the world she says "they treat all the other girls like toys" She makes it seem like im a slut just because I can get a guy I don't understand what I've done to her but, annoyed, she says "WHAT?!" When I try to have fun with guys she gives me a weird look even if I just flirt with friends then she goes and makes up some lies Lies about me saying that I flirt off my head, that I'd go out with anyone but usually, its alone that I want to be Nothing hurts more than your best friend thinking that you hate her and her not wanting to be friends anymore she always tries to be like me but she never dresses up she steals my clothes and buys my CDs she tries to show off some skin with clothes that are short and tight but for some reason she puts on a big sweatshirt before we begin when we go to parties or dances shes right there beside me dancing, jumping, swimming when i step forward, she advances one day she is my best friend the next, shes hers but everysingle day, she tries to be someone else by the end |
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Squirter Junior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 17Minnesota |
HEY!! This poem is SO true! I can totally relate! I'm so glad you decided to post this poem! I think that's what poetry is about! Telling other people how you feel and it's all the better if they can relate! Great writing! I'm a girl, and I know how we can be! Exactly like that! Well...keep up the great writing! It takes a lot to write something that long and great! |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
I can also relate to this.. I don't think she is being a real best friend. If she does accept that you flirt, or that you get a long with more guys then her.. That isn't a best friend! I'm not trying to be mean, but if you get were i'm going, then you know.. But you are kind of being a little selfish in the party saying she buys my cd's... It's cool and all that she could be copying you.. But did you ever think that she admires you so much, she really wants to be like you.. Maybe you can help her, Not to be just like you, but to be someone like you.. Get were i'm going??? I don't mean to afend you or anything, just kind of saying thats what it sounds like....!!!! Very good poem though, i liked it alot!!! Love ya, cutie If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
ahh... The constant stuggle of men. Trying to figure out woman. As much as I feel there is very little different between men and woman they do tend to a bit cinfuseing sometimes. The only advise I can offer is to listen very closely to her words for there is alot to learn from them. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this is a good poem!!! but just like cutie said maybe she admires you...but maybe shes just jealous of you too...i dont think that i would want a friend like her if she jumps from friend to friend...sounds like she cant keep just one friend...i know someone exactly like that who WAS a friend to me...but in the end i realized just cuz i dont have a car to taxi her around in she wouldnt hang around with me as much as my best friend...honestly if shes doing this to you she is not worth your time... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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