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Misty Blue
Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44


0 posted 2000-08-03 08:03 PM


Hey all I'm back from a long vacation and I had alot of time to write. Hope you like

I'm Over It

Now you wanna pay attention to every word I say
Now you wanna act as if I'm begging you to stay
Before you never understood where I was coming from
Before you never realized what we've become
After I always wondered where we would stand
After I always wondered why you never held my hand
Now you wanna accuse me of never caring  anyway
Now you wanna say it's my fault that you have gone astray
Before you never seemed to notice all the damage you've done
Before you never made me feel like I was number one
After I always figured my heart was in demand
After I always figured you would never understand
Sadly but surely I soon would forget
Sadly but surely I'm definately over it



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Lovely_Kris
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

1 posted 2000-08-03 11:33 PM


Wounderful poem . I think you did a great job and keep it up. I'll hope to read more of your poems.
Lovely_Kris

MeLScHneD
Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 11

2 posted 2000-08-04 12:01 PM


Ooh I can SOO relate to that! This poem is REALLY good!...but ya know what? If that poem is about real life...then you made the RIGHT choice! B/c some people just aren't worth all that pain and suffering....but you realize it after its happened, and your dream of them to be yours is already true...so its hard to let go...eventhough you should let go! Okay, its late, and I'm starting to talk jibberish..hehe...keep writin!!!

*<3~MeL ScHneD~<3*

TrueLUV
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.
3 posted 2000-08-04 02:25 AM


Hey good for you frget that guy he was all about him he's a selfish uncaring  a** but great poem keep it up :0
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