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MeLScHneD
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since 2000-07-28
Posts 11


0 posted 2000-08-03 01:21 AM


*~*Maybe...*~*

I promised to never do it again
I told myself, "Boys aren't worth it"
I said they'd always just be a friend
But "you and I" together always fit

I don't know how this started
Somewhere between the first look and the last kiss
I said it was good that we parted
But now its you that I miss

I don't know if I should say yes or no
I don't want another broken heart that I have to mend
Or worse...I don't want your heart to sink low
All because I said it should end

It seems weird how it goes off and on
One day, I love you
The next, that love is gone
I never know what to do

Your smile makes me melt
Your hug makes me weak
Your kiss is the best thing I've ever felt
And I love to hear you speak

I hope that you still take me
Even after a little wait
You and I were meant to be
Because I think this is fait

After all this time
I hope you'd let me guess
That you'll be mine
Because my answer is yes


*sorry this is kinda bad...but I think this person knows who they are! I love you!*



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DancinQueen
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Senior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
1 posted 2000-08-03 01:36 AM


This isn't bad at all! I really liked it. And I can sooo relate to it! KEep up the good work..and good luck with him =) I'm sure he'll come back to you

~!*DancinQueen*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

sweetstuff101
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
2 posted 2000-08-03 01:39 AM


that wasn't bad, it was great!  

Luv,
  ~*~sweetstuff~*~


~¤*¤~iF yOu LuV sOmEoNe, PuT ThEiR nAmE iN a CiRcLe, iNsTeAd Of A hEaRt, BcUz HeArTz CaN bReAk, BuT CiRcLeZ gO oN 4eVeR~¤*¤~


Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

3 posted 2000-08-03 02:05 PM


That definetly wasn't bad.  I hope whoever you wrote this for reads it.  Very good poem.  Good luck with them keep writing
Bel

cutie2005
Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA
4 posted 2000-08-03 10:20 PM


This was a really sweet poem! I liked it a lot, and been though it too!!! Just remember that there will always be little, and big tests in relationships, just to see if you can make it through, some times you don't and sometimes you do... It looks like you two failed the first couple, but are working it out to love again... Good job..
   Love ya,
    cutie

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

IsGona
Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723

5 posted 2000-08-03 10:26 PM


This is very sweet and things are going to work out.  Tours words are to pure not to.

IsGona

jeremydraul
Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
6 posted 2000-08-03 10:39 PM


Very well thought out. Makes me wonder If a girl I once was with would take me back. It was really sweet and direct, go with your feelings and do what you think is good for your heart and mind. Good Luck hun.

,.-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_.,

Misty Blue
Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 44

7 posted 2000-08-04 02:28 AM


I really felt this poem, Stay Tru and keep it up.
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