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Zombie Man
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since 1999-06-22
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0 posted 2000-08-02 11:24 PM


I don't know when but I know how.
Are lives will change starting now.
The sun will shine brighter than before.
I could be broke and poor.
But I don't care if I am.
As long you're with me.

Come with me, away from this place.
Lets start a life without the disgrace.
Till death do us part.
You will always have my heart.

I just can't stop thinking of you.
Getting with you is all I wanna do.
Having your arms around me, holding me tight.
Hearing your voice telling everything will be alright.
Lets build a wall to keep all the hate out.
You and me is what love is all about.

Come with me, away from this place.
Lets start a life without the disgrace.
Till death do us part.
You will always have my heart.

I won't let us fall apart.
Please don't ever leave my sight.
Protect me with all your might.
Some day this dream may turn real.
But until then i will keep my hope.

Come with me, away from this place.
Lets start a life without the disgrace.
Till death do us part.
You will always have my heart.

Please come with me.

© Copyright 2000 Michael Cheeseman II - All Rights Reserved
Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-03 12:13 PM


great poem....shows emotion throughout the entire thing and a great deal of love. keep writing!

salooma

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

2 posted 2000-08-03 10:09 PM


Beautiful poem!  That was so sweet.  Keep writing you have talent
Bel

Lovely_Kris
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

3 posted 2000-08-03 11:37 PM


Wounderful poem! I realy liked how you showed how you felt inside.
Lovely_Kris

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