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Kittie
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since 2000-07-08
Posts 103


0 posted 2000-08-02 01:54 PM


~A birthday dedication to my sister Chel~

Winnie the Pooh, and Piglet too
zigzag down her wall
while the koala corner shows love
with her childhood pictures dancing around her past
of art, jazz, ballet and tap
and the mingle with the large wrist watch,
and Kricket dall with the unicorns
that remind us all of her nonsmiling phase.
She's perfect in her order
and knows just what she likes,
like the candle holders along the ledge
and poems that she loves
show the personality she holds inside.
Her best friend is displayed with care
and sarcastic comments
are the visitors welcome notes
while the butterfly hairclips
dangle from the shoelace on the wall
by her make-up table shined to perfection
just like her ways to display
all of what she knows,
all of what she cares about,
and mostly what she loves to remember.
And in my heart,
I'll always remember,
the sister whom I admire.

© Copyright 2000 Kittie - All Rights Reserved
Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-08-02 02:53 PM


Hey there sweety, I am glad that you wrote a poem about my room.  I really did like it though.  I really do apperciate it.  It was very nice.  I hope that I have a great birthday.  Thank you once again.  Great poem, keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-08-02 03:25 PM


kittie~~~that is soo sweet...im really glad that you and her have a good relationship...keep up the good work!!!

~*~HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHEL~*~
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~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~


[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 08-02-2000).]

Salooma
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

3 posted 2000-08-03 12:30 PM


that's the sweetest thing....your sister's lucky to have you...
my sis's b-day is coming up...wish i could do something like this for her...  
Happy B-day Chel...

Salooma

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-08-03 07:45 AM


Oh Kittie, this was so wonderful! Your imagery left me visualizing this so clearly ... what a beautiful and sentimental glimpse into the love you have for your sister. Nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2000-08-03 09:55 AM


You sisters make all of our hearts sink everytime you two write each other.  You both are lucky you have each other.  Keep writing

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Lovely_Kris
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

6 posted 2000-08-03 10:57 AM


Wounderful poem. I realy enjoy this poem. I hope to read more.
Happy birthday chel

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18
Posts 733

7 posted 2000-08-03 01:35 PM


That is so sweet.  You must have a very good relationship with your sister, which must be so nice to have.  keep it up
Bel

Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
8 posted 2000-08-04 11:19 AM


I know that this is Kittie's poem, but I figured since it is about me and I already did reply, I want to thank all of you for reading it.  I want to thank everyone who wished me happy birthday.  It isn't for about a couple more days yet, but it is very much apperciated.  I love every single one of you and I am very happy that I get to share my birthday with all of you.  Thanks again.

Luv always,
Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Kittie
Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103

9 posted 2000-08-04 01:27 PM


Again, thank you to everyone for your responces. Michelle and I both appreciate the kind things you say, on my behalf as a writer, and on hers for her birthday.  Keep up your own wonderful writing and thanks again.
Kittie



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