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MeLScHneD
Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 11


0 posted 2000-08-01 11:24 PM


They tell me im beautiful...but act like im not
They say they love me...but truely hate me a lot
Why are boys so cruel?
What ever did i do?
They compliment me like crazy...but dont mean it at all
They say they want me...but treat me like a blow-up doll
Why are boys so cruel?
What ever did i do?
They are the sweetest thing to me...but then a jerk infront of friends
They say its forever...but the next day it ends
Why are boys so cruel?
What ever did i do?


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Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-01 11:28 PM


hey i know how you're feeling, but boys are boys right? don't worry about it, it's how you feel about yourself that counts not what a thousand people say!

salooma

DancinQueen
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Senior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
2 posted 2000-08-01 11:52 PM


I really like this poem alot. Too bad guys act like that sometimes. They'll come around one of these days when they decide to grow up =)

~!*DancinQueen*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-08-02 03:09 PM


what a good poem...but alot of guys arent like that...but alot of them are too...they need to grow up and act there age...but just like salooma said boys are boys...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

jeremydraul
Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
4 posted 2000-08-02 04:08 PM


Too many guys are like that. Id like to say Im not. And I wish that girls wouldnt get that impression but thats just the way it is. I enjoyed the poem and hope that the guys change, cause if your sweet enough, they should.
Tara
Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76
Minnesota
5 posted 2000-08-02 04:50 PM


Hey I really liked the poem.  I definitely agree.  Boys are Boys and they will always be boys.  I hope they start being cooler to you, cuz every girl deserves it.  Keep up the awesome work.  TAra
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