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IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

0 posted 2000-08-01 10:57 PM

Moving
Through
  Life
Alone
Again

Waiting
On
  Her
Looking
For her
  Smile

It's
Not so
  Bad
This
Time
  Alone

All I
Need to
  Do
Is think
Of
  Her

Opening up
My
  Heart
Hoping she'll
Come back to
  Me

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-01 11:11 PM

This is really nice...it's simple and to the point, but creative in every aspect. great piece!

salooma

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-08-02 12:49 PM

just like salooma said very creative...i like your style and how you post the poems!!!keep up the good work...

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-08-02 01:09 AM

sorry i had made a big mistake...

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 08-02-2000).]

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

4 posted 2000-08-02 01:10 AM

oops...this will never happen again i promise...signature-->

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 08-02-2000).]

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2000-08-02 06:09 AM

Very sweet and tender thoughts IsGona ... lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

6 posted 2000-08-02 07:22 AM

Salooma ~ As always, your coments are most appreciated

Erin ~ Thank you, not sure what you are apologiesing for but you are most forgiven my dear

/Kit ~ Thank you for you gracious comments

IsGona

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

7 posted 2000-08-02 09:26 PM

Great Poem Dude

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

8 posted 2000-08-03 06:57 PM

It is a great poem, great in its simplicity. But I've gotta know, did you reply to yourself?? I'm very confused.......

*~Meredith~*

If I were the sun,
You would be in shadow
And if I had a gun,
There'd be no tomorrow
*BNL

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

9 posted 2000-08-03 09:18 PM

haha
no I didn't even realize that. My brother prolly did that. We share a comp. lol

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