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Zombie Man
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 52
Va

0 posted 2000-08-01 09:23 PM


Everyday I wonder who are you?
At first you were my savior in life.
Then you turned to my hell.
But now you and me are threw and no more.

I realize you are no good for me.
While this is how it was meant to be.
You kept playing with me and never letting me know.
Now I'm gonna show you that it hurts to be a toy.
But now you and me are threw and no more.
It's no good when all is left is the lies.

Sometime you'll see this threw my eyes.
At the moment I just want to get away from you.
I would have put my life on the line for you.
You don't feel a single thing inside that cold body.
Look into my eyes and tell me it's all good.
When we both know it isn't true.
Butnow you and me are threw and no more.
You mean nothing to me know.

Go ahead and tell me what to be.
I can't live that life.
Never  knowingwhat to do when I am with you.
You make me feel like no one.
Now your in my past for always.
never  needing  to worry for your feelings.
But now you and me are threw and no more.

So please go away.
Thank god it's over.
Thank god it's done.

© Copyright 2000 Michael Cheeseman II - All Rights Reserved
Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

1 posted 2000-08-01 10:49 PM


hey seems like you are going through lots of pain, but you know what it's not worth it. you've got great talent here and lots of time to make it grow. keep on writing and let your sorrow disolve with your pen's ink!

salooma

[This message has been edited by Salooma (edited 08-01-2000).]

LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
2 posted 2000-08-01 10:57 PM


You sound very bitter, and with good cause. She obviously wasn't right for you. I'm glad you're through with her. Cheer up, though, you'll find love eventually.

If I were the sun,
You would be in shadow
And if I had a gun,
There'd be no tomorrow
*BNL

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