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thebeautybrat
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since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida

0 posted 2000-08-01 07:01 PM


I need some help for a new poem to write,
There were some others but they weren't quite right.
Now I'm asking for all of you,
To give me an idea for a poem or two.
And if I like your idea then that poem I will do.
I'm asking you to just give me a title
Then describe it and I'll think for a while.
If I can relate to what you have said,
I'll form a poem inside my head.
I'll post it in Teen Poetry #3
At the end I'll tell who gave this idea to me.

PLEASE HELP ME!!!!
ANY QUESTIONS POST THEM AT THE BOTTOM OF THIS PAGE!!
ANY SUGGESTIONS FOR A POEM FOR ME TO DO???
POST THEM AT THE END TOO!!
THANK YOU ALL FOR YOUR TIME!!



It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all.

© Copyright 2000 Leave it at (not telling) - All Rights Reserved
IsGona
Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723

1 posted 2000-08-01 09:19 PM


Title: Whatever
Subject: Descuss why it si becoming more popular for girls to have 90% guy friends and guys have 90% girl friends.  It dosn't make any sence yet every one seems to say they have more friends of the oposite sex these days.  It just dosn't make sence to me.  If a girl has all guy friends but her guy friends have all girl friends how can they all be friends w/ each other????  Maybe I'm thinking to much but this was on my mind so.... there you go, that's what I was thinkin'.

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

2 posted 2000-08-01 10:45 PM


hmmmm....maybe "Lies of Golden Truth" or "A Day's Awakining" I guess they are just titles..maybe you could find the meaning that seems right to you and base a poem on that? is it writer's block?! it take a while to get out of, but once you do you are better than before! good luck!

salooma

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-08-01 10:58 PM


There are TONS of wonderful ideas in the Poetry Challenge Forum BeautyBrat!  

Just click on the upper left corner icon for "Main Forum",

then scroll down to "Discussion Forums - Members Only"

then choose Poetry Challenge! Writer's Block? This might be just the place to get those creative juices flowing again.

Choose to see the last 30 days or more, and you'll get all sorts of wonderful ideas from members throughout the Passions Site ... have FUN!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-08-02 12:47 PM


thebeautybrat~~~this is really good why would you need help with writing a poem...when you just wrote a really good one???

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Acies
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Posts 7665
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5 posted 2000-08-02 10:38 AM


Don't you think it would be harder for you to write if someone gives you an idea on what to write?
Usually it's easier when you ujust write what you feel

As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR
"When then visions around you bring tears to

thebeautybrat
Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida
6 posted 2000-08-14 11:10 PM


IsGona- thank you for your reply but i'm not quite sure i can understand that enought to write a poem about it. i have mostly girl friends so i'm sorry!!

Salooma- hey thank you but i thought about your replies and i can't really think of anything to go alnog with the titles!! i will keep searching for meanings of these wonderful titles you thought of though!! thanks!!

kit- thank you for the information!! i think i will go to that!!

erin- thank you for complimenting me on my poem!! i just can not think of ANYTHING to write about!!

acire- thank you for replying and i do agree, however...the feelings that i have now are very difficult to put into words. i confuse myself and i know the poem would e a disaster!! thanks anyway!!

thank you everyone!! please keep replying!!


It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all.

thebeautybrat
Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida
7 posted 2000-08-17 07:10 PM


please keep giving me new ideas!!

Love is the greates feeling of all...but heartbreak is the worst feeling you can imagine.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
8 posted 2000-08-17 11:46 PM


Here's a boring idea for you (sorry, I was watching the Democratic Convention).  Write about a political issue that scares you.  Like the environment in your area, or not being in a good school.   Just a thought.  It's better than nothing isn't it?  Well, maybe not.  Ok, whatever you come up with, please post it soon!
thebeautybrat
Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114
Florida
9 posted 2000-08-22 06:51 PM


lakewalker- thank you very much!! i think you have given me an idea!! i will write about something that scares me!! i may not neccessarily write about democratic convention but something i'm afraid of!! thank you again very much!!

Love is the greates feeling of all...but heartbreak is the worst feeling you can imagine.

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