I Never Fell in love With you

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Teen Poetry #3

I Never Fell in love With you

Elilas
Junior Member

since 2000-03-15

Posts 20
The Dalles, Oregon, USA

0 posted 2000-08-01 02:11 PM

I never fell in love with you.
I’m not sorry thought,
you see my love for you,
is not an abyss that I would rush into,
with my stead fully galloping.

But my love for you,
is that solid piece of grant that seemed impossible to climb.
I did though,
and with no ropes,
you see my love is so great I risked all.
I risked all because to climb this mountain,
meant to never come down.

I was meet by an angel.
My angel,
with open wings of love.

And don’t you see,
if I had rush in,
my stead at full gallop,
I may have blazed out the other side,
never knowing,
that I had ever really loved.

So my angel don’t be sad,
I love you now more than I did,
that first time I whispered it softly into your ear.

If you guys tell my what you think I'm try do say here that would be great because I don't know if i get the point across.

                                     Steven

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2000-08-01 02:34 PM

Beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

sorrowfulangel
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 59
Memphis,TN

2 posted 2000-08-01 02:38 PM

I like your poem a lot....are you trying to say that if you had rushed into everything,you might have never gotten a chance to love...

"god is the biggest under-achiever I know,something good happens god is great,something bad happens,he now works in mysterious ways"

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

3 posted 2000-08-01 11:10 PM

i guess i'm not really understanding this one....any advice?

salooma

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