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Joy
Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 10


0 posted 2000-08-01 01:22 PM



He is my everything
He is my life
All I think of
All I want
He doesn't know

He's the only one for me
I dream of him
I cherish time spent with him
I miss him when he's gone
He doesn't know

It kills me when he's not around
I hate seeing him with other girls
I would even die for him
Yesterday, I almost did..
He doesn't know

© Copyright 2000 Joy - All Rights Reserved
Kittie
Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103

1 posted 2000-08-01 01:24 PM


Very well put, it's so beautifully put. Sometimes people don't know how important they are, but it's always nice to let them know somehow.
Kittie



Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-08-01 01:39 PM


why dont you tell this guy how you feel??? then he will know and maybe he feels the same way for you...but you'll never know unless you try...by the way welcome to passions!!!

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
3 posted 2000-08-01 04:52 PM


that's a really sweet thing to tell someone.  Have you? Have you told him at least how you feel? hmmmmm.....
welcome to passions!!! great writing

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

4 posted 2000-08-01 11:01 PM


welcome to passions! you know what? my advice is tell him everything in your heart, because then he'll understand that what you feel for him is more than anything else and he'll understand. good luck!

salooma

IsGona
Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723

5 posted 2000-08-01 11:07 PM


Welcome to passions  
I must agree w/ salooma.  My advise is to somehow comunicate your feelings to this guy.  If you don't the regret will tear you up.
Regards
IsGona

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