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jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
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State of Despair

0 posted 2000-08-01 11:50 AM


I only met her for a couple of days
And I cant describe the feelings that came my way
What do I do when a girl lives so far?
And I can't reach out to her like a star
Do I visit or do I forget?
Theres no way I can ever regret
The times we spent and the laughs we share
Now I miss you too much to bare
Tell me why, please give me a reason
What do I do now that it's a new season?
I want you to know how I feel about you truely
But its all too complicated and I don't want to disturb thee
I just cant seem to grip all these feelings
And now Im confronted with all these dealings
I'll take advice or anything you have to give
As long as it makes this hurt Im feeling no longer live
Im way too far to go back to what it used to be
So I have to share these words to all that can see
Im only a plane away but it seems so hard
To relive the feelings that we once jared
Now I have to say good bye until we meet again
And hope that your as sweet as when I met you then
These words don't begin to describe what I feel
But for now It's good until we become real



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Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-08-01 02:38 PM


Hey there, great poem.  I really enjoyed it.  Everything happens for a reason and I am sure that everything will work out just fine.  Just keep your head up.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
2 posted 2000-08-01 03:12 PM


didnt you post this one already but with a different title??? cuz i could swear that i already read it...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

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