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DancinQueen
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0 posted 2000-08-01 01:35 AM


* I Hate You So Much I Love You *

I hate the way you look at me,
and the way you make me feel.
I hate how you're always right,
and how you win every single fight.
I hate your cocky attitude,
and that mind of your's, oh so crued.
I hate how you always know the right things to say,
and how you call me everyday.
I hate how you're drawing me in,
and how I don't know whats going to happen.
But most of all..
I hate how I'm falling for you,
because that's the last thing i want to do.



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Erin
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1 posted 2000-08-01 10:12 AM


ohh wow dancinqueen...you left me speechless...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Salooma
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2 posted 2000-08-01 10:43 AM


Wow....I loved this....everything about it was just beautiful. Great work!

Salooma

DancinQueen
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3 posted 2000-08-01 03:42 PM


Thank you guys so much for your comments..means alot*

~!*DancinQueen*!~


"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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4 posted 2000-08-01 04:30 PM


awesome poem...great writing
one question though, why are you holding yourself back?

DancinQueen
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5 posted 2000-08-01 04:41 PM


Acire~ Because i've been hurt so many times in the past. Everytime i let myself fall i get hurt and im just relaly cautious and i dont want it to happen again..

"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Lovely_Kris
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6 posted 2000-08-01 04:49 PM


I love this poem. I think you did a wounderful poem. I hope some day you can find someone who cares alot about you.
Lovely_Kris

StarPryncess17
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7 posted 2000-08-01 05:10 PM


wow girl! now you sound like me. lol. don't do that. you may be passing up the perfect chance...then you'll spend a long while pondering what could have been. Just keep that in mind. Maybe you should express to this guy your fears of falling because the last few times you've hit the pavement and make him understand how it's going to de hard for you...but if he's a good guy and is supportive, then he'll stick by you and take away some of the pain and fears. Just keep your head up.
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*


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