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jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

0 posted 2000-08-01 01:09 AM

I miss everything about you
From your smile to the sparkle in your eyes
I'm not sure what to think or what to pursue
But I'll always remember the special times

I cant wait for the day I see your face
And experience the way you make me feel
But until then its all in slow pace
Because my breath is what you steal

When I watch stars I often see
Your name spelled out in the sky
But I know there’s no way it can be
And I try everything to get by

The ocean depth isn’t as deep as I feel for you
And I cant get your voice out of my mind
With all these feelings, I hope you knew
That my love is only one of a kind

Love,
Jeremy

© Jeremy Raulinaitis

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

1 posted 2000-08-01 01:38 AM

I love this poem! I'm sorry about your girl. I wish you the best of luck* Keep writing..i want to read more..

~!*DancinQueen*!~

"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

2 posted 2000-08-01 07:00 AM

Welcome to Passions!!! I loved this poem. Keep up the good work. It will get better, just keep your head up.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

3 posted 2000-08-01 09:16 AM

Welcome to passions! You show a great talent here and I hope that she comes back to you. Keep writing!

jason

Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear...
-Metallica-

Salooma
Senior Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 781

4 posted 2000-08-01 09:58 AM

Wow! Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful poem and very sweet indeed. Maybe you could get the girl of your dreams back by giving her that poem.

Salooma

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2000-08-01 10:06 AM

Welcome to Passions Jeremy!

What a sweet and tender first post! Lovely thoughts ... hope to read more!

Check your e-mail for a special message.

Best wishes,
/Kit

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

6 posted 2000-08-01 10:26 AM

Thanks y'all. Im flattered that you would say such sweet things. Its my first real poem and I sent it to her. I hope she liked it and Ill post some more poems.
Thanks, Jeremy

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

7 posted 2000-08-01 10:36 AM

welcomr to passsions!!! i am sorry that you lost this girl...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

mystique
Junior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 22

8 posted 2000-08-01 12:13 PM

Great Poem! I hope she comes back to you!
Keep up the writing, it is really good.

mystique

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

9 posted 2000-08-01 10:35 PM

Well, she loved my poem. She said it almost made her cry because of the memories. Im visiting her in Texas from Boston come December. Im so excited, thanks to everyone for the comments, I really really appreciate them so much! Thanks again! Jeremy

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

10 posted 2000-08-01 11:13 PM

This poem is fantastic! So sweet and heart-felt. Why do all the nice guys live so far away?! Oh well, maybe it's just the way we raise 'em down here in the south..... good job, my friend.

*~Meredith~*

If I were the sun,
You would be in shadow
And if I had a gun,
There'd be no tomorrow
*BNL

*ChrisLover*
Junior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 46
erie, colo

11 posted 2000-08-02 06:31 PM

hey im glad that all luck helped. and now your dreams are fullfilled , i wish you the best of luck in the future!! sorry i cant spell!! and i really loved the poem!! welcome to passions!!love janette

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

12 posted 2000-08-02 06:57 PM

Such Wonderful sentiments here! I'm glad that it all worked out for you! Keep up the good work and best of luck!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

13 posted 2000-08-02 07:13 PM

p.s. welcome to passions!

~*~The human race stopped fearing god; after that came it's punishment, it began to fear itself, to crave the phantasmagorical, and now it quakes befo

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