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The Pain
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
~The Pain~ the pain is everything. the every you, and every me. yet you cannot feel it, for it exists only in me. i'm tired now, so i'll let it be. every thing i look at, and everything i see, is nothing at all, nothing but pain for me. i hate the way i feel, and i hate that love's not real. all thats left in me, the pain, won't let me be. all i really need is this- i need to be, set free. Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Great poem~ I'm so sorry you've had to go thro the pain of love. cheer up because things can only go up hill =) ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Enchanted Star Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 14New Port Richey, FL |
. [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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Nikolette Sadness
since 2000-07-29
Posts 337port richey fl. |
lets all give a round of applause for enchanted star for making my day!!! thanx a million! Nikolette Sadness i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
I'm so sorry...don't let negitive comments effect you. Because i thought it was a wonderful poem..dont stop posting! ~!*DancinQueen*!~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I thought this poem was very well written. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
good poem...but you see alot of us have been in your shoes before...its just one of lifes consequences that we go through...keep up the good work... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
I know I've felt like this so many times and I just wish there was a way to make you feel better. But I know that with time, the pain will heal and it'll feel like it was never there. Just keep your head up and you'll find freedom! Salooma |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
My friend this is great i really enjoyed the read and hope to see more real soon and i'm going to email you latter just so you know. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hmmmmm. i was going thru all the other replies and this one person's reply was just edited. was it that bad? just curious  too much sadness in this poem. I hope everything turns out better for you. One thing you should realize is that there is only one person that could set you free and that's yourself... |
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