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kimmy
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since 2000-07-31
Posts 98


0 posted 2000-07-31 02:32 AM


The sun is gone,
But I see the light,
And the moon still shines,
A silvery white,

The stars glow brightly,
In the skies above,
Showing you the way,
Proving their love,

The wishes made upon,
The fire in the sky,
Come to you in dreams,
In the bed where you lie,

Because the sun shows a way,
But the moon leads you there,
And the stars shine upon you,
Proving at least they do care,

And you're friendships are forever,
And the friendship so they seem,
Play a future as a movie,
All the while in your dreams,

The sun has gone down,
But the moon has rose,
And the stars are there,
Not meaning to impse,

The best friends you talk to,
Whom help make you see,
That anything you want,
Is anything you can be,

You never want to lose them,
As you make your wish upon a star,
It doesn't matter where they travel,
It doesn't even matter how far,

Their the ones who understand you,
The ones who actually care,
They're the friends to find,
Who are seemingly quote rare,

And you know you love them,
And still cry when they aren't here,
But int your heart and tears that fall,
They are never too near,

You know these friends are forever,
And the friendships as they seem,
Create memories for now and ever,
As the stars show you in your dreams.


© Copyright 2000 kimmy - All Rights Reserved
Lovely_Kris
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

1 posted 2000-07-31 03:53 AM


Welcome to passions. I know you would like it here. What a wounderful poem. I think friends are the ones who help you out the most and fun to talk to. I hope you keep up the great work.
Lovely_Kris


[This message has been edited by Lovely_Kris (edited 07-31-2000).]

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-07-31 07:32 AM


Welcome to Passions Kimmy!

What a wonderful poem, and an inspiring tribute to friendship ... hope to read more!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-31-2000).]

Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2000-07-31 09:20 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!  I hope that you enjoy it here.  Great first post.  I enjoyed it very much.  Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

LoveBug
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4 posted 2000-07-31 10:32 AM


Welcome to Passions!!
This is a beautiful poem. True, friendship is a rare thing tha should be treasured. I hope to see more of you around here!  

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-07-31 11:00 AM


Beautiful poem! I loved it. Very innocent and mysterious. (can those two words go together? Hmmm...) Anyways, nice work. Stick around, post some more, and I'll be happy. Be cool!

*~Meredith~*

If I were the sun,
You would be in shadow
And if I had a gun,
There'd be no tomorrow
*BNL

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
6 posted 2000-07-31 03:57 PM


welcome to passions!!! this is a good first post...i hope to see more from you...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

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