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Enchanted Star
Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 14
New Port Richey, FL

0 posted 2000-07-30 10:01 PM


There is a light
A bright shinnning light
Buring rays tough my soul as do to you
This light connects us
In a way not even the angels above can explain
You are apart of me
You are in my soul
You are in my heart
I love you
You are my light at the end of this forever darkening tunnel....



CindyLuC

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Lovely_Kris
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

1 posted 2000-07-30 10:07 PM


wounderful I think this is a great poem. I liked the way you expressed your true fellings. I hope to read more of your work and keep up the great work.
Lovely_Kris

sweetstuff101
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
2 posted 2000-07-31 12:12 PM


wow that was really good!! keep up the great work!!

Luv,
  ~*~sweetstuff~*~


~People R supposed 2 B luved, and things R supposed 2 B used; most of our problems stem from realiTy: Things R luved and People R used~

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-07-31 02:00 AM


ohh how sweet...i wish you the best with this guy...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
4 posted 2000-07-31 09:22 AM


Hey nice work.  I enjoyed it very much.  I hope to read more.

Chel  


"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

sherm
Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94
Evansville,IN
5 posted 2000-07-31 12:20 PM


great poem!    i really like your work   keep up the great writing
FairyPrincess
Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25

6 posted 2000-07-31 12:27 PM


That was a really great poem. It showed lots of emotion, I hope things work out with you and him. Keep up the good work.

Jess

Jose Marti
Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
7 posted 2000-08-01 12:06 PM


Cindy, you're a good poet.
I'm almost ashamed to have my stuff posted in the same forum as your's.

DancinQueen
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Senior Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
8 posted 2000-08-01 12:51 PM


Wow! Great poem. im looking forward to reading more of your work

"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be"
~Carol King

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