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sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

0 posted 2000-07-30 02:55 AM

im searching for the words
the right ones to say
to make you feel better
and the worrying go away

im coming up empty
nothing that fits
words dont help
the pain this emits

im so scared
and so are you
i just want
you to come home to

life isnt fair
what its done here
we have each other every day
but only for a year

what have i done
by letting us fall in love so
it will only bring you pain
when i have to go

but now i cant live without you
and i think you feel the same
your going to go through a lot
and im the one to blame

[This message has been edited by sherm (edited 07-30-2000).]

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

1 posted 2000-07-30 11:54 AM

I think this is a great poem. I also think Love is hard to get over especially someone you care about. You some time have to go with the flow and see what happens in the future. I hope things work out. Keep up the great job and hope to read more.
Lovely_Kris

[This message has been edited by Lovely_Kris (edited 07-30-2000).]

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

2 posted 2000-07-30 12:56 PM

sherm~~~i wish you the best of luck with this girl...and i hope things with you two turn out good...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

mr0001
Junior Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 39

3 posted 2000-07-30 03:04 PM

i am so sorry that you are going through this...i can completley relate!! you never know what will happen, distance doesn't always end things!!

mr

"crazy" is just who you are...amplified.

some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color.

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

4 posted 2000-07-30 03:27 PM

This is a lovely poem sherm, and one can sence the emotion put into it.

I believe everything happend for a reason, and it is best for us, even if at that time it was the wors thing that could happen.

Good luck and keep up the good writing.

Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

5 posted 2000-07-31 12:25 PM

that is really sad, that was a great poem, i hope it all works out well for you.

Luv,
~*~sweetstuff~*~

~People R supposed 2 B luved, and things R supposed 2 B used; most of our problems stem from realiTy: Things R luved and People R used~

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

6 posted 2000-07-31 09:04 AM

Sherm~ Great poem. It was sad, but it was well written. I hope that everything works out. I am sure that if you two are meant for each other you will work it all out. Just keep your head up.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

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