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No Name Yet, Lets just say All I Need part two
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No Name Yet, Lets just say All I Need part two |
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Jmk3112 New Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 3Franklin, Wi. |
The sky so gray, It's hard to see far, There's only one to lead my way, And she lights up like a star. My path was dark, I could not see, But her amazing beauty, Drew unto me. Dreams came to my head, Thoughts so great, You and I "2ge+her", On our 1st date. The path became clearer, So I started to walk, But when I reached you, I was too shy to talk. So I took your hand, And looked into your eyes, Just hoping that, You wouldnt cry. SO I brush your hair back, And give a kiss too, Then say how much, That I love you. J.M.K The Next Lance Bass |
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Kittie Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 103 |
Another very sweet piece. I really liked the part of "too shy to talk," I'm pretty sure people can relate to this also. Keep up the passion and great work! Kittie |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
Very good i realy liked your poem. I hope to read more of your work. Lovely_Kris |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
Excellent poem!! keep up the good work and I'll keep reading. Jess |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
awwwww...that was so sweet...keep up the good work...this girl must be really special to you... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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mr0001 Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39 |
this is such an incredible piece!! good job  mr  "crazy" is just who you are...amplified. some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Very very sweet! This must be a lucky girl. Very good poem-keep it up Bel |
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