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crazy4her
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since 2000-07-29
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0 posted 2000-07-29 08:44 PM


The Crush

When i found out you were my crush,
I got this tingling feeling like a rush.
When i looked into your eyes so blue,
I had to have you right then i knew.
For weeks and weeks never showing my true emotions, For fear of causing a big comotion.
Finally I said  the words "i love you"
Feeling like a fool they came right out of the blue.
Now here we are somewhat together, myself only wishing it would last forever.
but now as I conclude,the only phrase i hope you say is "I love you too"


© Copyright 2000 crazy4her - All Rights Reserved
Kittie
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since 2000-07-08
Posts 103

1 posted 2000-07-29 09:35 PM


Very sweet ending and very beautiful piece of work.  Keep up the great work.
Kittie



sherm
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since 2000-07-21
Posts 94
Evansville,IN
2 posted 2000-07-30 03:11 AM


really nice, sweet poem    keep up the good work
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-07-30 07:35 AM


Welcome to Passions Crazy4Her!

This is a very sweet and sentimental first post ... I hope they say "I Love You" too!  Hope to read more!

Check your e-mail for a special message.

Best wishes,
/Kit

FairyPrincess
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since 2000-07-26
Posts 25

4 posted 2000-07-30 07:49 AM


that was a really sweet poem. keep up the good work and i'll keep reading.

Jess

Lovely_Kris
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

5 posted 2000-07-30 11:42 AM


What a woundeful piece and I also think this piece was sweet. I really hope  to read more. Keep up the great work.
Lovely_Kris

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
6 posted 2000-07-30 12:52 PM


welcome to passions!!! i hope that you enjoy it here as much as i do...nice first post...i hope to see more by you...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

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