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Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-07-29 05:37 PM

I know I'm not writing as many poems as I used to, but I never seem to have any time anymore

The subtlety in your eyes,
Just gave your game away.

I’ve been lonely too long,
Only loving in my dreams.

I look into your brown eyes,
And just get lost in wonder.

I wonder if you know,
What my mind is thinking.

I glance your way now and then,
And catch you looking my way.

I wonder if its accident,
Or if you wanna get caught.

I'm not sure what to do,
Shall I look your way or not?

Did the subtlety in my eyes,
Just give my game away?

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82)

*A poets mind never rests, It is always dreaming*

crazy4her
New Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 3

1 posted 2000-07-29 08:56 PM

priceless. think thats the game all of us teens play

sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

2 posted 2000-07-30 03:09 AM

great poem it totally captured "the game" perfectly really cool

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-07-30 03:53 PM

I really like this poem, it's definately about issues we face as teens. And your choice of words made it great. I'm impressed.

*~Meredith~*

If I could read your mind,
What would you say?
Would it take my breath away?
*Human

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

4 posted 2000-07-31 12:47 PM

Well, I must say, This is the total oppisite reaction i thought i would get for this one...Thank you for your comments

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- Poetic Bliss 82)

*A poets mind never rests, It is always dreaming*

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-08-01 11:48 AM

well it's nice to read more from you and i hope the game works for you. and i agree i think we all play this game. enjoyed the read keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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