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Jmk3112
New Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 3
Franklin, Wi.

0 posted 2000-07-29 03:30 PM

All I Need

One million kisses,
All over your body.
What can I say,
You are a hottie.

Your loving heart,
Your words so sweet.
Hearing your voice,
Is my favorite treat.

Whenever you're hurt,
I feel the pain.
Whatever you think,
I think the same.

As long as you live,
I'll live on too.
No matter our future,
I'll always like you.

J.M.K. The next Lance Bass

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-07-29 03:50 PM

welcome to passions!!! nice first post...i hope to read more by you...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

2 posted 2000-07-29 05:13 PM

Hey, cool poem! And the rhyming works really well. I'm down with your style, man. Be cool.

*~Meredith~*

If I could read your mind,
What would you say?
Would it take my breath away?
*Human

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

3 posted 2000-07-29 06:17 PM

HEY! I LOVED you're poem. The girl you wrote it for is sooo lucky. And good luck with her!

) Can't wait to read more of your work..i love your style

<3 always~* DancinQueen

Lovely_Kris
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

4 posted 2000-07-29 06:25 PM

Welcome to passions.I liked your poem alot. Keep up the great work and i hope to read more.
Lovely_Kris

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

5 posted 2000-07-29 08:05 PM

This was so great.. Sweet also...I really hope to see more of your great poems..
Love ya
cutie

Kittie
Member

since 2000-07-08

Posts 103

6 posted 2000-07-29 09:25 PM

This is so cute, and so sweet, I'm sure most people can relate. Keep up the great work!
Kittie

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2000-07-30 07:19 AM

Welcome to Passions JMK!

Great first post ... the rhythm and rhyme scheme flow beautifully!

Check your e-mail for a special message.

Best wishes,
/Kit

FairyPrincess
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 25

8 posted 2000-07-30 08:17 AM

That was a really sweet poem. I love the style you wrote it in. keep up the good work. can't wait to read more.

Jess

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

9 posted 2000-07-31 09:34 PM

Very good-nice n sweet. Good first post. The next Lance Bass huh? Keep up the writing
Bel

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

10 posted 2000-07-31 10:23 PM

Wow. Cute. Welcome to passions... never aspire to be Lance Bass... I'm sure you could do better! Good job!
Jenn

Isabelle
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 176
Indiana

11 posted 2000-07-31 11:01 PM

I wanted to welcome u to passions. You did a fairly good job for your first post. I hope to see more.

Jeanna

"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
~Voltaire~

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