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Jose Marti
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washing DC

0 posted 2000-07-29 02:02 PM


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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-07-29 03:37 PM


what was going through your mind??? well if you ever are on jerry springer look me up im in chicago not to far from the studio...LOL

P.S.~~~ill pray for you so her man dont get you...LOL
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Chel
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
2 posted 2000-07-29 04:09 PM


Hey there, very interesting topic.  I think I have heard this story, but I don't remember.  Well Keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
3 posted 2000-07-29 05:01 PM


Hey yeah, I think I saw that episode!!  
Just kidding, I have to admit your title intrigued me, and I think your poem was cool. In a morbid sort of way.

*~Meredith~*

And now I live
In a world I call my own,
It's always nice when no one's home....
*Lit

DancinQueen
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
4 posted 2000-07-29 06:26 PM


wow LOL interesting hope to read more! =)

~!*DancinQueen*!~

Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 374
washing DC
5 posted 2000-07-29 06:55 PM


thanks for reading my poem everybody.
Chel~I think I did tell you about this already, but Im not sure.

Rose Red
Junior Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 10
scotland
6 posted 2000-07-29 07:08 PM


sad thing is that something like this can and does happen, and usually doesn't end well for any parties concerned. The husband, the wife, YOU, if they have children etc etc. A move like this is like throwing a stone in a pond, the ripple effect can be awesome. Besides she may wat you now, but have you ever thought what happens when/if she dumps ya?  Scary stuff, almost too much so to be glamourised here. Yanno? I don't mean that badly, but hmmm it is messing with people's lives kinda stuff and it doesn't set well with me. I hope you find solutions to this situation, or hopefully it's just a poem. By the way, if you are under 18 and her hubby gets wind of it and is mad...ya do realise she can go to jail?
It's all freaky to me.
Sincere best wishes
~RR

The_Driven
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 60

7 posted 2000-07-29 11:31 PM


I found this poem to be very entertaining, but also startlingly true in some places. As for the title, heh, neat. Good job, and keep up the good work.
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