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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
And then there was you... Love is fleeting I have seen it happen Love comes and goes Yet never settles And then there was you You captured my heart Entrapment I say Yet with pleasure I gladly fell For your lover's trap And then there was you With eyes so deep Forever caging in my soul You have taken my heart Yet I never want it back With you I feel safe With you I feel alife You are my light In this dark world So I ask with fear My love... Will you marry me? Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within... |
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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
I wrote this poem to ask my ex-girlfriend to marry me... but before I could give it she told me that she fell in love with someone else... Hopefully someone else can find use for this poem... Sincerely Broken_Heart Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within... |
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FoxyGirl Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 17 |
That's a really great poem. Sorry bout your girlfriend. I hope you could find someone else that would marry you and love you forever. Save the poem and give it to ur next love. Jenn [This message has been edited by FoxyGirl (edited 07-29-2000).] |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
this is a beautiful poem and im really sorry about your girlfriend,,,,,,,,,,,,but dont worry things will get better jsut give it time Everything happes for a reason and remember.........never frown ,not even when your heart is breaking,cos you never know when someone is falling in love with your smile kepp writing! Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~  The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i am really sorry that she did this to you...my heart goes out to you...keep up the good work...if you ever wanna chat my email is BASHFUL2896@aol.com...and its not there to look pretty so use it if you need to... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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