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IsGona
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0 posted 2000-07-29 12:35 PM



As a flower blossoms with beauty            
    Humanity blossoms with joy and love  
As a flower must face the winter sun        
    Humanity must face truth and life    

© Copyright 2000 IsGona - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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1 posted 2000-07-29 12:38 PM


This is utter perfection! Bravo!

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

sweetstuff101
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2 posted 2000-07-29 12:42 PM


Wonderful!

Luv,
~*~sweetstuff~*~


~People R supposed 2 B luved, and things R supposed 2 B used; most of our problems stem from realiTy: Things R luved and People R used~

IsGona
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3 posted 2000-07-29 12:50 PM


thank u both
you are very sweet

and sweetstuff, who wrote that quote?  Sad but true.  

Erin
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~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-07-29 03:33 PM


just like you said isgona short and sweet...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2000-07-30 07:54 AM


So much said so wisely, in so few words ... this is lovely Isgona!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sudhir Iyer
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6 posted 2000-07-31 04:19 AM


One verse and such a beautiful one...
IsGona, This is absolutely great...

regards,
sudhir

Chel
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7 posted 2000-07-31 09:13 AM


Great work.  

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"True love last forever"

littleC
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8 posted 2000-07-31 07:10 PM


Absolutly beautifull!!!
Enjoying to read, and how true!

littleC

Alwye
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In the space between moments
9 posted 2000-07-31 10:53 PM


Very beautiful and rings with truth too.  Excellent!  

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

Salooma
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10 posted 2000-08-01 11:16 PM


beautiful indeed! i loved this piece....such a great concept.

salooma

IsGona
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11 posted 2000-08-02 07:26 AM


Thank you all.  Your comments are most appreciated.

IsGona

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN"
~Hatebreed~

Acies
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12 posted 2000-08-02 10:18 AM


magnificent!!! speechless!!! bravo!!!


As i wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

IsGona
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13 posted 2000-08-02 09:12 PM


Thank you for your kind words
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