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pharon
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2000-07-28 10:05 PM


please tell me this is not forever
tell me we can make it through this.
we are the best of friends but we
have always been so much more than that,
so tell me this is not forever,
please, just say we'll make it through.

what ever happened to all we promised,
that nothing would ever come between us?
after all we have seen and overcome,
will a couple hundred miles finally break us?
please hold on to all our promises
and don't let this come between us.

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this is not quite finished...i don't know the outcome yet...please keep me in your thoughts and pray this all works out b/c this guy is my second half and i'm so afraid this move is going to be the hardest thing our friendship has ever been through...thanx
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FairyPrincess
Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25

1 posted 2000-07-28 10:24 PM


That was a great poem. I really hope things work out for you guys. keep up the good work.

Jess

Ethan Halo
Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
2 posted 2000-07-28 10:33 PM


a wise man once said," it is only the end for those who choose not to remember."

You will weather this storm. with all the ways the world has divised to keep in contact with people, you'll have no problem keeping in touch. good luck, friend.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

sweetstuff101
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 375
OK, USA
3 posted 2000-07-29 12:31 PM


ooooohh I'm sorry about that happening, I know how it feels   I will keep you in my prayers and hope that it all works out. but neway that was still a good poem.

Luv,
  ~*~sweetstuff~*~


~People R supposed 2 B luved, and things R supposed 2 B used; most of our problems stem from realiTy: Things R luved and People R used~

sherm
Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94
Evansville,IN
4 posted 2000-07-29 03:02 AM


that was a great poem    i know just how you feel    im gonna have to deal with it in a year and i can only hope that everything will work out     i hope everything works for you    good luck
Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-07-29 05:29 PM


i am sorry that you have to go through this...i wish you the best of luck...hopefully things will work out between the two of yous...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

DancinQueen
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA
6 posted 2000-07-29 06:21 PM


thats a beautiful poem and i'm sorry you're going thro something like this. stay strong because no matter where you are you'll still be in each others hearts =)

~!*DancinQueen*!~

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