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sherm
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since 2000-07-21
Posts 94
Evansville,IN

0 posted 2000-07-28 05:35 PM


your kiss
soft and sweet
fills me with joy
from my head to my feet

your kiss
wet and slow
brightens my day
and makes me glow

your kiss
passionate and long
fixes everything
rights the wrong

your kiss
powerful as the nile
its all i need
to make me smile

© Copyright 2000 Geoff A. Anderson - All Rights Reserved
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-07-28 06:45 PM


sounds like you are in love sherm...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

mr0001
Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39

2 posted 2000-07-28 08:36 PM


good poem!! it must be nice to have someone like that in your life...keep up the good work. bye  

       mr



"crazy" is just who you are...amplified.

some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color.


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