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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~

0 posted 2000-07-27 03:48 PM



~*~Love's File~*~

I found someone,
that I love so dear.
I hope that,
I can always keep him near.

He has been my world,
for this past time.
And I pray that,
I can forever call him mine.

He is the one,
who holds the key to my heart.
I will dread the day,
if we ever decide to part.

The only one who,
can truely make me smile.
The perfect guy,
to keep in my love's file.


~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

© Copyright 2000 Erin Erbs - All Rights Reserved
FairyPrincess
Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25

1 posted 2000-07-27 06:52 PM


Very sweet poem ERIN. it sounds like you really love this guy. I hope you guys are happy forever.

*Jess*

Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
2 posted 2000-07-27 06:54 PM


quite an interesting piece of work. it's a very "generation next" way to describe where you hold the near and dear people. File them under "love" and hope the file is never corrupted.
very cute and clever. good vibes; it works to lighten the mood around here! =) thanks for postin'.

Everyone's got their demons.
We all got somethin' to atone for.

sherm
Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94
Evansville,IN
3 posted 2000-07-27 07:03 PM


awesome!    i hope you two stay together and happy    good luck
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-07-27 07:21 PM


fairy princess~~~i love this guy with all my heart...thanks for the reply...

ethan~~~i havent seen you lately...where have you been??? thanks for the post...

sherm~~~thanks...i hope that we stay together too...


~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Gregory
Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 22
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States
5 posted 2000-07-27 09:48 PM


That was a really nice poem...seem like you love this guy a lot~  I wish you guys the best of luck, and continue to write!
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