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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2000-07-26 05:26 PM


You swear you're loyal,
I try to listen to your words,
As they flow through me.
Is this your advice?

Your suggestions are more like demands,
You call to me for help,
You're like my sister.
Yet you try to plan my love, my life, my heart's path.

Stop coaxing my life away from me.
You need to see me,
Not only yourself and what you need.
Isn't that what a friend is for??

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Erin
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1 posted 2000-07-26 05:31 PM


why would you want to be friends with someone like that??? it sounds like someone that tried to run your life...i wouldnt want a friend like that...they have there own life to live...and they dont need to be trying to live your life too...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
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2 posted 2007-12-03 09:41 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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