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Sheila425
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since 2000-07-26
Posts 9


0 posted 2000-07-26 04:13 PM


FRIENDS FOR LIFE

You come to me with your problems,
and I go to you with mine.
Thats the way all friends should be,
equally seperated out in line.
Not one better than the other,
not scarred for their past mistakes.
You should be able to come to each other,
for a friendship is give and take.

DON'T TAKE FRIENDS FOR GRANTED.



© Copyright 2000 Sheila425 - All Rights Reserved
Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
1 posted 2000-07-26 04:18 PM


why dont you read my poem...a so called friend...you say dont take friends for granted...well the question is...what if they take you for granted???

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
2 posted 2000-07-26 04:22 PM


Well said.All are equal in friendship.

Sincerely
A_L

BABYFACE
Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 17
DALLAS,TX
3 posted 2000-07-26 04:28 PM


GOOD POEM I LIKE IT!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK HOPE TO SEE MORE
Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2000-07-27 06:11 AM


I really enjoyed this Sheila ... such wonderful and wise sentiments wrapped up in this lovely poem!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-12-15 10:21 PM


Very Much Enjoyed



ARCTIC WIND

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