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amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
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0 posted 07-26-2000 02:45 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amazon_lover


I'll hold on to it till I breathe my last
In the dark my heart glows only for you
In living death it only beats for you
In indescribable trauma it laughs only for you

I'll live in your subconscious mind
Travel the roads of strenuous wind
I just would make you happy always
And you'll always see it in my ways

All I expect is to be your loving friend forever
Words spoken are a disguise to hide my fever
All I miss is your words and touch,my lover
Heavenly feeling it was when we were together

Longing and pain I suffer in silence
I'll wait for your decision with patience
Life is not a war of minds to take control
Its an understanding that we exist for each other

Past is gone with longing and unfulfilled dreams
Future is not our way as it seems
I just wish I could share all my feelings
But there is a wall between us and please break it

I can just come out with all in my mind
Just show what's on your mind as I'm blind
Blind due to rejection,due to pain
I get a feeling that my love goes in vain

Sincerely
A_L

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Sheila425
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1 posted 07-26-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for Sheila425   Email Sheila425   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sheila425

I think the word "WOW!!!!!" sums it all up. Keep writing, you have great potential to do so. Pouring your heart out...thats the way to do it babe.

PS...

  "Never frown...you never know who is falling in love with your smile."
amazon_lover
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2 posted 07-26-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

Thanks Sheila..I don't smile much..but I never frown..not a typical romantic guy anyone looks for.
Erin
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since 06-15-2000
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3 posted 07-26-2000 04:08 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

well what can i say??? you always amaze me with your poems...you write beautifully...keep up the good work...i enjoy reading your poetry...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 07-27-2000 06:07 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Very nicely penned Amazon_Lover!  Well thought out, and a great flow ... wonderful, keep up the great work!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Artic Wind
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5 posted 12-15-2007 10:21 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Very Much Enjoyed



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